persuasive writing

This week we were to write a piece of writing to persuade miss to either give us music while education or not to.

Does music help people learn,or distract them?does it depend on the music,or on the person?

Music

I believe music can distract all no matter the type of person or music.This puts people off task.Most of our students are independent and like to work alone which also means they like peace and quiet.When it comes to learning music isn’t the best but it can stop us from learning,Learning is one of the most important things we need in life and our parents send us to school for an education not a vacation.

First,because education is one of the most important things in life music shouldn’t start.Music can put our grades down and it’ll put our parents down too.Our Mothers and Fathers pay for our education and send us to school for the same reason.If they realise that they will be sending us to school just to listen to music they’ll be disappointed and would realise how unprepared we would be for secondary school.

Secondly,secondary school will be straight up strict.If the student will be going to a catholic school and their knowledge in Religious Education is low.The next school they enter would be very confused of what catholic primary school they came to,because as said our parents pay for our Education and send us here for a reason.Many from this year 7&8 class get distracted easily and music won’t do any good to it.

In addition,Music isn’t the problem nor the person but music can be a big distraction when it comes to school and education.Music can also annoy many and from my point of view there would be no point in music because our class can just talk normally and it’ll ruin that reward.No one would ever have a finished piece of learning work and will end up going home with no answer if their parents or family members ask what they learnt that current day at school.

I highly recommend no music because education is about learning the good skills in life and the soon to be secondary students wouldn’t be any where near prepared for their next school.