We were/are learning to write descriptive paragraphs.
Round the corner,out from under the bridge.A snug,cozy bright lazy sun of 20 degrees came out with big white fluffy clouds.Bob cycles in circles round the block,he’s as fast as a speeding bullet.About to be behind schedule for his final race with about 1 minute left.30 seconds left and he came in a split second.
3...2..1. The race has begun,cycling round the track faster than ever leaning into the edge of the path just to go round.Faster and faster round the track,on his 27th round,having to hit 50 roundz.It’s been about 20 minutes and he’s on his 40th round.10 more times and one more racer to overtake.Coming round to the corner almost at the finish line...done a SPONTANEOUS yell to our first place racer,Bob!!!
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